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Ehh..

Long story short... the story is a bit cliche. But the animation looks pretty good..

Lame...

I hate it when people post crappy trailers to crappy movies that probably wont even be made! Why dont you just make the movie and get it over with? Anyways, you really should put more work into animation because pasting messed up photos of corpses and stuff doesnt make it any better.

You damn kids...

Okay, I think I've had enough... I swear you kids these days have no sense of style. You have no original thoughts in your heads. You need to turn the television off, read a book, watch independent film, and listen to music other than what Top 10 radio plays. So that way when you decide to make and animation it's not full of all the lamest parts of pop culture... for crying out loud... what- were you thinking that a crappy Star Wars light saber fight with Eminem playing in the background was a good idea?!! I'm sorry to have this be on one of your animations Josh, I really mean to tell this to all the children of Newgrounds. Long story short.... I'm really getting bored of seeing the same ol' crap on newgrounds.

Oh yeah, and as a critique of the animation, your animation shouldn't end before the song in it even begins.

Keep practicing and maybe one day we will all praise the Grand Flash Animator: Josh.

That was great.

Wow.. I dont know if you intended it but I thought the silence lended itself well to the animation. I really liked the style and the story was interesting. Kinda wished it didnt hang so long on some of the dialog cards, but that's mere details... Overall I liked it a lot!

In addition

Pretty useful to those who know nothing about animation... but there's one thing you forgot about making a good stick figure animation. And that one thing is...

DONT SUCK!

But seriously I think you covered the important parts.. especially the part about needing patience. Good work.

Excellent!

Wow.. that's one of the best all-around things I've ever seen on NG! Good solid animation, creative idea, with excellent choice of music to boot! (MOst others contain some manner of crappy techno or metal music) I owuld agree that it wasnt *that* funny... BUT! The rest of the composition made up for that. Keep it up!

Well..

What can I say? It was a solid product, not very violent and the humor is somewhat juvenile in it's audience. But as far as a professional quality animation, it was great.

Eh...

Well... I dunno... I would rather just watch Full Metal Jacket.

Eh...

Well the audio I thought was awesome... and I was viewing it as a piece of art and all... but I still thought it was lacking. I even tried viewing it again as a piece of abstract expressionist work, but still the colors didn't seem to reflect any synch with the audio that I could find, they seemed like arbitrary use of gradients and tweens.... well I guess what I'm trying to say is, you can't ask the audience to see a piece as art. They have to see it for themselves. And the art should be able to stand on it's own, without you needing to coax the audience into believing it's art.

Well, I really liked the music and the story. Very cool!

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KoMaT responds:

Kuikui...

I thought the day would never come...

Whoa, before this moment I would think that all things on the internet inspired by DBZ was crap. But this acutally blew my mind. Rather solid character animation, decent pacing, and very creative use of flash! Keep up the good work.

I hold zero tolerance for bad art.

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